Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Computer games are not harmful for children (Argumentative Essay)

  There are a lot of games in the world.Some are good and some are bloody.  Some games like Minecraft help someone become creative because it is a game of building things. And even though there are cruel games, they have age restrictions so kids can't play it. And almost no one plays bloody games.Computer games are not harmful for children and there are two reasons.


   First, computer games are not bad because you can be creative. A game called Minecraft is a crafting game. You can think about a structure and make it your own way. And you can make tools by cutting down trees.It is a fun game admired by children and teenagers. All of my room mates enjoy it and some guy is a genius at minecraft. And because it is not a bloody game parents enjoy it too. And they will like it if you play a good game with a schedule of playing games. I play minecraft and my dad says it is okay.

     Second, games like online shooting games are not bad because you can relieve stress  by shooting targets.  Also, games like Starcraft can make you good in planning. And games like Sudden Attack, which is a survival game, can help you know where to stay in battle, which could help some boys when they go the army. It also improves teamwork. I think this improves teamwork because you can save others by giving medical box and save their life. But just don't think that you can really do that thing. Because you need to have tons of things to save a dying person.



    Some people say that there is too much blood in games and that is true. Some show blood and knives. These graphics cause children to be violent. And games can confuse reality and fantasy. There are many bad things that happen because of games. One day there was a news about a mad person killing some one and that person liked playing games. Also bullies are game players too. So those were some negative parts of these games.


        In conclusion I still believe that computer games are not harmful for children.You can be more creative, it can improve teamwork, help boys in the future and helps relieving stress. If you don't want to get addicted, you just need a schedule. Also, one more thing: you can be popular if you are good at playing games. So that is why computer games are not harmful for children. Just beware that you don't play really bloody game or you will become like the murderer.  I think the most important thing you should do is control yourself not to be a bad person.

1 comment:

  1. I don't know about computer games but you seem to know how to enjoy playing computer games. Anyway I am very happy to see your good improvement in writing in many types. Good teacher and good student! Thank you!

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