Oh snow how white you are, you are very white and pure which makes me happy.
Oh how piled you are that makes me want to jump in you.
Oh how round that you can be when I make you to a ball.
Oh snow how defensive you are.
You can be hard or be smooth.
Oh snow how mysterious you are. We don't know what is under you.
Oh snow how fun you are, we have you to play with.
Oh snow how small but large you are.
Snow flakes together make a big piece, oh snow you make me think of friendship.
Oh snow how wonderful you are, finishing the design of the nature.
Oh snow how kind you are, blanketing the mountain and the land when they are cold.
O h snow how kind you are blanketing sleeping animals.
What a beautiful thing you are.
Your friend
Samuel Kim
It's owe some. You are a creative thinker and have a sweet heart. It made me feel warm and cozy while I read yours.
ReplyDeleteOne more, it makes me read and read again!
ReplyDeleteSamuel,
ReplyDeleteYou are very good at using personifications to describe snow. This is creative and well-done, keep working hard!
Hi!
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a great ode to snow using many personifications. You also made good use of the pictures of snow to make your post better. Keep up the good work!
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)